参考例句
(文)1. It will last16 days, since August 8, 2008, carry on 28 matches of 302 little projects, and sell 7 million tickets.
2. In order to further improve the traffic environment, the expressway of Beijing will increase from present 500 kilometers to 718 kilometers. (末尾变成了句号)
3.Beingjing will let them going out swiftly, meantime, securing the people participating in Olypic Games.
4. Hope Beijing Olympic Games can be successful in holding！
点 评
本文表意清楚，用词恰当，能够用变换的句式将北京奥运会这一情况记录下来。 这一点很值得肯定。
不足之处在于：行文过程中，应该注意句子间的衔接。在适当的地方用上适当的衔接词（如：连词）是很必要的。个别词的用法（如：succeed），你应该再仔细考究一下。
给 分 理 由
1. 缺连接词and, 扣2分。
2.标点符号使用不当，扣1分。
3. Beijing will let the going out swift, on time, security of people participating in Olympic Games. 本句中出现四处严重的表达错误，扣8分。
4. succeed用法错误，扣2分。
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